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Subject: Write an e-mail to a sunburned president who is shipwrecked on a desert island.
Dear Mr. President,
One week ago I knew, that You are having a rest on a cruise in the Caribbean sea.
As a law-abiding citizen I must ask You about Your rest. How do You feel about this cruise, Mr. President, is it good enough? Does the sun suit for You? I heard, that you are sunburned, our special forces have sent some sun-protecting lotion and sunglasses. Does the air wetness is high enough to enjoy the rest? If something does not suit You, we will fix it immediately. Here in our country is cold, wet snow and wind every day… Everyone is waiting for you to come back and enjoy the north weather with us! Oh! I hear someone is talking on television right now about a shipwrecked cruise liner. This is awful! Oh, there is told, that You were on this liner and now You are on a safe desert island, Mr. President. Glad to hear, that everything is good.
So I will not take a lot of time from You, Mr. President. You should enjoy the rest of your vacancy, because there is only 2 months left. Wish You a good luck.
Yours sincerely,
Igor B.
Dear Mr. President,
One week ago I knew, that You are having a rest on a cruise in the Caribbean sea.
As a law-abiding citizen I must ask You about Your rest. How do You feel about this cruise, Mr. President, is it good enough? Does the sun suit for You? I heard, that you are sunburned, our special forces have sent some sun-protecting lotion and sunglasses. Does the air wetness is high enough to enjoy the rest? If something does not suit You, we will fix it immediately. Here in our country is cold, wet snow and wind every day… Everyone is waiting for you to come back and enjoy the north weather with us! Oh! I hear someone is talking on television right now about a shipwrecked cruise liner. This is awful! Oh, there is told, that You were on this liner and now You are on a safe desert island, Mr. President. Glad to hear, that everything is good.
So I will not take a lot of time from You, Mr. President. You should enjoy the rest of your vacancy, because there is only 2 months left. Wish You a good luck.
Yours sincerely,
Igor B.
I liked this wor,I have a feeling that you wrote to the president in real life!
ОтветитьУдалитьIt was interesting to read the letter to Mr.President from Igor.
ОтветитьУдалитьVery intresting, i liked it.
ОтветитьУдалитьReally interesting topic to muse,thank you for your excellent work.
ОтветитьУдалитьIgor, you have crazy fantasy, but I like it. Good job!
ОтветитьУдалить* Little remark. I think information about how subject was generated it is not important for readers.
You write very emotionally.I like your writing style.Good job!
ОтветитьУдалитьYour letter is great and interesting. If it was in real life i am sure that president would answer to you.
ОтветитьУдалитьYou have a good fantasy. It was really interesting to read.
ОтветитьУдалитьYou letter is interesting. Very easy read this.
ОтветитьУдалитьI like you email.